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Icarus - Poem - by ~mewhaku:iconmewhaku:



Icarus
by mewhaku

As I flew too close to the sun,
My wings just seemed to fall.
As I wished I could go higher -
To that ever glowing light.
I started to crash to the sea...

On the wings of Icarus,
On those wax wings I flew free.
I forgot about the warning,
And fell into the sea.

I know now I shouldn't fly,
To where heaven lies clear.
If I should step past the boundary,
I'd crash right down to here.

When mortals fly to high,
All we'll know is fear.
It's been proved by the past -
By alchemy and tears..

A brothers' past,
An escape gone wrong
People's lives, tarnished by
That heat, the lost swan song.

So as I gaze into the sky,
And hope that I could have it all,
I realize now, that's foolish,
The ones who try, they fall.
©2008 ~mewhaku
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Um, random poem about the Greek myth of Icarus and Daedalus.
^^;
I think I've been watching Fullmetal Alchemist too much...
Um. Yeah.
(hm... must end on random quote...)

I LOVE EARTH! XD
(and apparantly too much Invader Zim...)

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Um.. is there really any other copyrights other than mine for writing it?
uh...
Greek myth of Icarus (c) to the Greeks. XD;
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~aaronvegeguy:iconaaronvegeguy: May 12, 2008, 3:39:00 PM
Always love a good icarus poem
also, you can never watch too much full metal

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Never Trust A Heart That Is So Bent It Can't Break
-Classic Cars by Bright Eyes
*Icarus20:iconIcarus20: May 12, 2008, 3:40:11 PM
Couple instances where 'to' should be 'too' but otherwise not bad...

I wonder why this caught me eye :p

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It's difficult to know who to trust in life. Then again, the guy with the horns and the hooves should have been a no-brainer.
~firebreathingmew:iconfirebreathingmew: May 12, 2008, 3:41:05 PM
wow i leik it ^^

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I try to be happy... but the world keeps getting in my way....
i try to be an angel... but my dark heart wont let me....
what am i? a fallen angel... or a rising demon....
~mewhaku:iconmewhaku: May 12, 2008, 4:23:07 PM
Thanks. ^_^ Within 10 minutes of putting it up it got three favorites.. O_o None of my stuff has gotten that before...

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They just don't understand how I feel in my heart,
They don't stop to listen, I feel so apart...
They just don't see things the way that I do!
I hope that someday I'll find someone who's true. ~ mewhaku
~mewhaku:iconmewhaku: May 12, 2008, 4:23:46 PM
Yeah, I'm not the best editor. ^^;

And hey, who knows?

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They just don't understand how I feel in my heart,
They don't stop to listen, I feel so apart...
They just don't see things the way that I do!
I hope that someday I'll find someone who's true. ~ mewhaku
~mewhaku:iconmewhaku: May 12, 2008, 4:24:16 PM
True. Very True.
And Thanks for the favorite. ^_^

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They just don't understand how I feel in my heart,
They don't stop to listen, I feel so apart...
They just don't see things the way that I do!
I hope that someday I'll find someone who's true. ~ mewhaku
~KetsuekiNeko:iconKetsuekiNeko: May 12, 2008, 9:05:31 PM
that's really good, love!

Reminds me of the poem i did: [link]

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I am mentally poking your brain!!!!!!!!!!!!
~animefreak1313:iconanimefreak1313: May 13, 2008, 6:12:53 AM
I've read that Greek myth so many times........Every time I read it, I want to cry T_T.......Such a sweet poem. I just :heart: it!! *sob*

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"The moral of Snow White is never eat apples." ~Lemony Snicket

"One person's crazyness is another person's reality." ~Tim Burton

"Go ahead and scream your head off! We're miles from where anyone can hear you!" ~Pee-wee Herman
~Rabadenzo:iconRabadenzo: May 13, 2008, 8:20:38 AM
nice one, know the story, it rocks

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I dare to be stupid
~firebreathingmew:iconfirebreathingmew: May 13, 2008, 1:55:09 PM
*smiles* thats awsome then, great job!! ^^

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I try to be happy... but the world keeps getting in my way....
i try to be an angel... but my dark heart wont let me....
what am i? a fallen angel... or a rising demon....